Free me!!
by Bobby Cardozo
Currently feeling unsecure.
Feels like being used.
Trying to search for answers.
Dazed and confused.
Running endlessly,
Towards the bottom-less fun,
Deprived from honesty
Sanity lost within breakin sun.
Try to grab hold,
Something that out of reach,
Seeing those fake gold,
Holding to something you can't keep.
It seems like i'm lost,
Lost beneath the steady sea,
Heart is like a cold frost,
Please someone, let me be free.
More poems coming. Been carefully counting the same days that past away. Having been doing the same thing for quite sometimes now. Desperately need to get out from this mess.
Hmmm... dah pukul 4.00 petang ni. Nak gi main bola takde geng. Gi pinjam vcd lagi lah. Gonna pinjam any box set i think. Movie marathon. Tengok movie sampai muntah... i guess.
Bobby's out!!
"He's there in case I want it all
He's there cause I want
He's scared cause I want it all
He's there cause I want
All in all the clock is slow
Six color pictures all in a row
Of a marigold" taken from Marigold as performed by Dave Grohl in Nirvana Prescious Rareties
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2 comments:
Like I've said in previous post, your poems have progressively matured in the past few weeks. Sigh.. why la.. extreme lows or towards it can magnify certain talents. Macam Daniel Johns, takleh write anything kalau tak depress. Anyway, I like this one better than the previous one, though number of stanza for the 2nd and 4th lines in both 2nd and 3rd phrases bleh diperbaiki.. but hey, who needs to tweak genuinely expressed feelings? That's my motto anyway.
Hi Irni...
Thank you for the comments.
I guess there's still much that can be tweak off. Maybe it was the fact that all the poems i've created were all kinda spontainious. I rite them and then published them.
But, all comments are most welcome.
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