Thursday, January 06, 2005

Select the unselected (Poem)

Select the unselected
by Bobby Cardozo


Alone,
Now on stand-by,
Adrift from reality,
Checking proper identity.

Untouched,
Unknown to friends,
Living full in sarcastic life,
Clog in countless identities.

Morally laid,
Devide to tell the truth,
Or walk the path of lies,
One must see by self.

Hold him,
May he never walk alone,
Guide him to reality,
Help him find - Immortality


Currently feeling unsecure. Don't know why? Ahh... nevermind lah.

"Untuk seketika, aku hilang kawalan diri, untuk seketika, aku HILANG" Cuai by Butterfingers
Rasa mcm ni gak ni... hmmm Aiiyaaa!!!

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

From the past poems in Friendster, I've seen sudden inner-growth in your sense and sensitivity towards playing with emotions and words, Mr Bob. Very impressive. Though do pardon me for judging it from the meagre few poems that I've the priviledge to encounter. Maybe you have it in you all the while.

I like the intro flow of this lost character in 'Select The Unselected', giving me vivid image of fallacy and insecurity blended in one solid thought. Though I don't feel what he needs is Immortality. But that's your call.

Irni